Drabble: To Thine Own Self
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(Written for the
blackpearlsails prompt "I should have..."
Title: To Thine Own Self
Characters: Will, Calypso
Rating: G
Disclaimer: Property of Disney, Buena Vista, and Bruckheimer. I profit only in imagination.
"I should have …"
Not died for his wife? Not helped Jack secure the heart? Not aided Jack to lure the enemy into negotiation? Not turned tables on those who painted him the fool? Not tried to save his father?
Where would second-guessing end, once embarked? Should he have stayed at the workhouse or with his drunken uncle? Left Jack in jail and Elizabeth with … God knew what?
Let Jack twitch on a rope?
Hang regrets. Turner laughed, curiously buoyant as he finally saw he would have done nothing different.
Calypso smirked. "See? You de freest o’ dem all."
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Title: To Thine Own Self
Characters: Will, Calypso
Rating: G
Disclaimer: Property of Disney, Buena Vista, and Bruckheimer. I profit only in imagination.
"I should have …"
Not died for his wife? Not helped Jack secure the heart? Not aided Jack to lure the enemy into negotiation? Not turned tables on those who painted him the fool? Not tried to save his father?
Where would second-guessing end, once embarked? Should he have stayed at the workhouse or with his drunken uncle? Left Jack in jail and Elizabeth with … God knew what?
Let Jack twitch on a rope?
Hang regrets. Turner laughed, curiously buoyant as he finally saw he would have done nothing different.
Calypso smirked. "See? You de freest o’ dem all."
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Date: 2008-03-05 03:10 am (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2008-03-05 03:43 am (UTC)Yeah, Will doesn't strike me as the type to waste much time on "might have"s. (I suppose it helps that he's usually doing what he earnestly considers to be The Right Thing - and not just in a way that best serves his own situation.)
"Elizabeth with... God knew what?"
I take that to mean Will didn't think Liz would have lasted long as a typical upper-crust bride.
And I had to Awwwww at the "workhouse" and smirk at the "drunken uncle." (Hey, Will doesn't have any relatives!)
Mostly, I wonder if Calypso often has these little talks (or mind reading sessions) with her loyal servant. :)
A lovely drabble.
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Date: 2008-03-05 04:14 am (UTC)I was thinking of Barbossa and the kidnapping, actually - but the nice (and necessary, by size) thing about a drabble is it can mean a multitude of things ...
usually doing what he earnestly considers to be The Right Thing
For some people, being able to sleep at night is more important to them than who they're sleeping with. *G*
I wonder if Calypso often has these little talks
It's just Will out there - he needs a cheerleader sometimes, worse than I think most would think.
Thanks!
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Date: 2008-03-05 05:15 am (UTC)Just looked it up real quick using Google:
1)accurately placed or thrown; "his aim was true"; "he was dead on target"
2)devoted (sometimes fanatically) to a cause or concept or truth; "true believers bonded together against all who disagreed with them"
3)truthful: expressing or given to expressing the truth; "a true statement"; "gave truthful testimony"; "a truthful person"
4)dependable: worthy of being depended on; "a dependable worker"; "an honest working stiff"; "a reliable source of information"; "he was
true to his word"; "I would be true for there are those who trust me"
5)genuine: not pretended; sincerely felt or expressed; "genuine emotion"; "her interest in people was unfeigned"; "true grief"
Heeeeyyyy...can you write something about Will being all these true things? I'd want to, but I don't think I've the skill to do Will justice.
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Date: 2008-03-05 04:49 pm (UTC)I think you should take a stab at it. Then post it for us all to see!
Glad you liked it.
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Date: 2008-03-05 06:18 pm (UTC)Beautiful drabble!
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Date: 2008-03-05 06:39 pm (UTC)Thanks!
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Date: 2008-03-05 10:17 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-03-07 04:52 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-03-07 07:11 am (UTC)It is a great writer indeed who can express profound concepts like these in such spare language, and make them perfectly clear, as well as expressing them so beautifully. You've done that here with such skill, darling.
(I'll let you finish the rest of the syllogism ;D)
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Date: 2008-03-08 05:51 am (UTC)I just wanted to try something different - it seemed about every story I read was Jack and/or Elizabeth whinging about how they couldn't be together, or hadn't gotten together sooner, and I've always enjoyed, anyway, the idea of having no regrets because you've lived your life as right as you were able. ;-)
Praise from Willofthewisp
Date: 2009-10-01 02:02 am (UTC)Re: Praise from Willofthewisp
Date: 2009-10-02 05:46 am (UTC)Thanks!