Hee~ This is such a great fic. Love the "Steps" thing. xD (*is kinda jealous, since I would need this sort of flow to write the characters for my own fic*)
And I just though I had to comment on this that you wrote in another comment, because man...
I feel sort of sorry for Will. Here everything he's doing is basically FOR Elizabeth, to save her ass, and she's off discovering herself without worrying too much about what specifically happened to this guy (seriously, did you see her asking Jack about HOW Will was press-ganged into Davy Jones's crew? Or how Jack found out about it? Or what could happen to him over there?).
So true. Ugh. Not a question and for someone who proclaims to love Will, she should have asked. But, as I said elsewhere... She's all Jack in mind and action, and Will only in words. And not that many words, either.
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Date: 2006-07-24 12:59 pm (UTC)(*is kinda jealous, since I would need this sort of flow to write the characters for my own fic*)
And I just though I had to comment on this that you wrote in another comment, because man...
I feel sort of sorry for Will. Here everything he's doing is basically FOR Elizabeth, to save her ass, and she's off discovering herself without worrying too much about what specifically happened to this guy (seriously, did you see her asking Jack about HOW Will was press-ganged into Davy Jones's crew? Or how Jack found out about it? Or what could happen to him over there?).
So true. Ugh. Not a question and for someone who proclaims to love Will, she should have asked. But, as I said elsewhere... She's all Jack in mind and action, and Will only in words. And not that many words, either.