I've read one or two good first person books in my life time, the default seems to be third person.
I think it's badly written because it was based off Twilight, and Twilight is badly written, there fore, badly written fan fic is turned into badly written original fic.
My problem is how the two character's had a Dom/Sub contract made up, and then the guy totally ignores everything and the girl is goes with it. You don't do that sort of thing. Not to mention, to all this vanilla people reading the book for kicks, they'll get the wrong idea about the BDSM community. It's not like that and the Author has the responsibility to do her research and do it the right way - treat it with respect - and not just because it adds an element of novelty to the book.
as an m/m writer who does write BDSM - that just disgusts me!
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Date: 2012-07-12 11:40 pm (UTC)I think it's badly written because it was based off Twilight, and Twilight is badly written, there fore, badly written fan fic is turned into badly written original fic.
My problem is how the two character's had a Dom/Sub contract made up, and then the guy totally ignores everything and the girl is goes with it. You don't do that sort of thing. Not to mention, to all this vanilla people reading the book for kicks, they'll get the wrong idea about the BDSM community. It's not like that and the Author has the responsibility to do her research and do it the right way - treat it with respect - and not just because it adds an element of novelty to the book.
as an m/m writer who does write BDSM - that just disgusts me!