Lovely sword fight--nothing like the thrust and parry of a man with a sword or two. Like that he bartered away the waters--and for some reason Jack with a little gray is very attractive. A couple of lines in what you've writ stand out--see Lady Mouse's comment. Will has always been beautiful to me for entirely different reasons than Jack. Nobody likes to be alone, man just weren't constructed that way. Thanks.
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Date: 2009-04-18 01:14 pm (UTC)