Date: 2009-04-02 11:22 pm (UTC)
I just wanted to say I loved this. I think it perfectly sums up Will's feelings toward Jack.

And against his better judgment Will had tried to forget the glimpse he’d gotten of Jack’s face, the absolute horror, shock, and pain in his expression...

I'm so glad you mentioned Will seeing Jack's expression. I love that movie, despite its faults, and that image of Jack's face is one of the things that stays with me. It's completely unguarded and real, and I'm glad Will saw it (even if he tried to forget it).

And on an off-note, I have to say that your last line keeps reminding me of "That'll do, pig" from "Babe." :)

But really nice job.
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