I like this, it is full of details, small things that put you in the story. The girl next door seems a decent sort, though I do worry with Will leaving that note behind. Hopefully, she will come to no grief over it.
I had always wondered where Will got that blue coat from... another mystery solved!
You should write more stories like this, you populate the world around the characters so well, I love that. These people didn't exist in a vacuum.
I do remember you mentioning a new Prissy story in the offing...?
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Date: 2009-01-14 01:11 am (UTC)I had always wondered where Will got that blue coat from... another mystery solved!
You should write more stories like this, you populate the world around the characters so well, I love that. These people didn't exist in a vacuum.
I do remember you mentioning a new Prissy story in the offing...?