Wow, Ver! I really liked that. You packed a huge punch in a small number of words, and I think that the OOCness is debatable - if you're going to skew the story to a J/E, who knows wtf could happen?
BTW, when I saw the description, I thought you went all Stepford Sparrabether, but I like what it ended up being - you should post it to pirategasm. And Sparrabeth comms!
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Date: 2008-06-17 03:06 pm (UTC)BTW, when I saw the description, I thought you went all Stepford Sparrabether, but I like what it ended up being - you should post it to pirategasm. And Sparrabeth comms!