I like the parallel construction here. (WTF is wrong with me that I noticed it in the middle of that?)
I'm glad somebody notices such a small thing, because I phrased it deliberately ... I try not to simply make it "tab A into slot B" and I realize many people sort of race through the porn part of porn (I've done it myself) for the mental "rush" of it, without paying attention to details. And when I was younger, I sort of wrote it that way, too. But I sit and think about the sex now, maybe sometimes to the detriment of actually sitting and writing it. LOL
Anyway, thanks for reading! (And yes, the "box" line was entirely appropriate as well. *G*)
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Date: 2008-12-19 08:20 pm (UTC)I'm glad somebody notices such a small thing, because I phrased it deliberately ... I try not to simply make it "tab A into slot B" and I realize many people sort of race through the porn part of porn (I've done it myself) for the mental "rush" of it, without paying attention to details. And when I was younger, I sort of wrote it that way, too. But I sit and think about the sex now, maybe sometimes to the detriment of actually sitting and writing it. LOL
Anyway, thanks for reading! (And yes, the "box" line was entirely appropriate as well. *G*)