I like your Will, the way he thinks. "Being Human" is a much better fourth step than, say, "They Lived Happily Ever After." Somehow it puts them on more equal footing (and I know that's what you're going for).

And you've got me wondering now: has Jack ever lied to Will under direct questioning? He really hasn't, has he. (At least, not directly. :p)

Thank you - Great fic!