I think your Will is spot-on (as usual). That he'd get upset, leave, then let himself go again, is perfectly believable, especially considering that more pragmatic, own-arse-saving bit of personality he developed in the second movie.
I also really liked how the sex was understated - it just was a part of Will's evolution into Step Four, and neither Will nor Jack is one to be gaudy about the serious stuff.
Your next step: collaborate with Ms. Ranken and deliver the best post-DMC fic ever - preferably novel-length, if you please.
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I really like it (as usual).
I think your Will is spot-on (as usual). That he'd get upset, leave, then let himself go again, is perfectly believable, especially considering that more pragmatic, own-arse-saving bit of personality he developed in the second movie.
I also really liked how the sex was understated - it just was a part of Will's evolution into Step Four, and neither Will nor Jack is one to be gaudy about the serious stuff.
Your next step: collaborate with Ms. Ranken and deliver the best post-DMC fic ever - preferably novel-length, if you please.