ext_17951 ([identity profile] obsidianromance.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] veronica_rich 2006-03-27 01:16 am (UTC)

Loved the story! I was so excited to read this!

Brilliant dialog and characterization! I loved all the intereactions between Jack and Will, and the flaws/strenghts you gave them. Great job!

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