I think Jack with a little gray would be quite appealing. I don't think Will would want to think he's aging closer to death, but it might make him more "human" and less "legend" (sleeping with a legend is a pain in the ass, more trouble than a human, LOL). I'm glad you liked the story.

Now I would ask you, out of curiosity, what it is you like about Will in contrast to Jack. You discuss in comments to things and in your own stories what you like about Jack, so I sort of know that, but being a Will fan, now my brain is piqued by you saying that ... :-D