No, you're right, it's a helluva hard. I still have points where I think I could've come up with a better story than this, but by that I mean "more exciting" or "using more mystery and magic" rather than something that can be explained prosaically - I'm not so good at the supernatural stuff.

Will does seem to have a thing for women who like to try to boss him around, doesn't he? Wonder how he'd fare with our merry band of pirates from TP, LOL ...

Thanks for reading and your detailed comments, as always. :-)