Succinct and well-written and unsettling. Ah, gotta think about this. Not only is Elizabeth unfaithful, but Jack has managed to betray the man to whom he gave immortality ("The OOC factor of this is yours to judge; I like to think it works *only* if ALL three characters shift a little to the left in characterization.").
Alright then, given the sun rises in the West and Germany won World War II, I acknowledge that Will would stick to the Code and behave in such a fashion. I think. Maybe. There is a child though, who is not responsible for the actions of his parents. Greek gods are vengeful to those who do them wrong and to their children as well. So yes, Calypso could behave in such a fashion. However could canon Will let an innocent suffer? As your fic does not explicitly say what happens to the child, I will fondly believe Will saves him.
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Alright then, given the sun rises in the West and Germany won World War II, I acknowledge that Will would stick to the Code and behave in such a fashion. I think. Maybe. There is a child though, who is not responsible for the actions of his parents. Greek gods are vengeful to those who do them wrong and to their children as well. So yes, Calypso could behave in such a fashion. However could canon Will let an innocent suffer? As your fic does not explicitly say what happens to the child, I will fondly believe Will saves him.