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veronica_rich ([personal profile] veronica_rich) wrote2008-03-27 12:49 am

Drabble: "Birdwatcher"

"Birdwatcher"
Rating: G
Pairing: W/E ... others, if you squint
Disclaimer: Belongs to Buena Vista and Bruckheimer. I derive no profit from this.
Summary: Post-AWE, Will's POV - response to "Fly" prompt at [livejournal.com profile] blackpearlsails, inspired by the screenwriters' allusion to a William Turner in history who studied avians.


Turner’s eyes opened as salt water swirled over them; oddly, he could see clear as a well-cast bell. Against the gray sky was an askew square of sail, ropes gathered to two figures.

He’d heard Swann’s protests to Sparrow’s insistence they leave, even as he was being anchored to the sea, over the rush of waves replacing the tympani of his own heartbeat.

He could stay Below, relinquishing all he’d loved, become the ghost of Calypso’s Will. Or he could remember Beckett and the awful ships, and defy the downward current.

Turner knew which would keep his two birds flying.

[identity profile] hippediva.livejournal.com 2008-03-27 09:19 pm (UTC)(link)
OOOH that is LOVELY! Just beautiful! I really like the use of words----'askew'...'anchored'....'tympani' (WONDERFUL!) and most of all 'awful', used in its oldest and most potent form. BRAVA!

[identity profile] veronica-rich.livejournal.com 2008-03-27 11:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Glad you liked my efforts at vocabulary - seems to matter a lot more when you have fewer words to offer up!